The emotion of your piece is very eye catching. The coloring is marvelous and the pose is very fluent and soft. I think you may want to change the lighting, however, as it does not really add to the scene, it takes away, almost. Also, the man's eye is bugging me and I don't know why. Other than that, you did a marvelous job.
Thanks! Yeah for me there are a lot of things that feel out of place... i think i should be more careful with perspective. Also... will have to look at the lighting. What would you change of the lighting